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TheSybarite

  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: Creations

    Thanks a lot....:D

    Jun 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: Creations

    Thank you....I'm glad you liked the poem! :)

    Jun 23, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: Pathetic

    Thank you so much.....your review just made my day! :) :D

    Jun 13, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: Pathetic

    I hope so too....:) :)

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: Pathetic

    Hey...I've fixed the 'knew' 'know' thing. Thanks for pointing it out! I'm glad you liked it! Gonna remember your tip from now on, thanks! :)

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: Pathetic

    Hey...thanks a lot for your review! I've edited all the 'knew's to 'know's...guess it's time to brush up my grammar! Thanks for pointing it out. This piece was the result ...

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: Pathetic

    Hey...thanks for your precious review! Those grammatical errors were actual and unintentional mistakes *blushes in embarrassment* Thanks for pointing them out. I've corrected them. As for the depth, I

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Boundless

    I see your point. Perhaps I'll write another piece describing 'him' and 'his qualities'. Thanks for your review! :)

    Jun 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Boundless

    Well, everyone's got a different vision; the last two lines are my favourite, while you don't quite see their point. Everyone has got their preferences, and isn't that the beauty ...

    Jun 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Boundless

    I'm glad you like it...thanks a ton for your lovely words! :)

    Jun 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Boundless

    I'm happy that my words could make you feel something and remember someone..that's kind of why I do not describe any one particular person here; I wanted people to read ...

    Jun 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Boundless

    Thank you so very much...:)

    Jun 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Boundless

    Hey...thanks for the suggestions. I've edited the poem a bit accordingly. I thought every first word of new line needs capitalisation. So glad you pointed it out! :)

    May 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Boundless

    Thanks for your just made my day! :) :) I guess I love the word 'that', so I'm gonna let it be there. Thanks!

    May 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Supernatural Re: In The House Of The Once-Righteous

    You can edit it to make them one stanza, like you wanted them to be :)

    May 18, 2014


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