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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Deceptions

    Thank you for your amazing review. I never realised the beginning was a bit too much. I'll keep it in mind next time. Again, thanks a ton!

    Dec 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Deceptions

    Wow! Thanks a lot...you just made my day!

    Dec 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Deceptions

    Thank you so much....! I'm glad you liked it :)

    Dec 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Deceptions

    Thank you! Glad you liked it :)

    Dec 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Deceptions

    Thank you for your amazing review. Well, I kinda wanted to say that by the time we realize people are fake, we're already too much in love with them to ...

    Dec 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Calm

    Thank you so much! Your review made my day :)

    Aug 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Take Me To Peace

    Thank you! Well, she is open to interpretation. It is up to the reader whether they want her to be good or bad. But as for me, I wrote her ...

    Aug 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Take Me To Peace

    Thank you so much! I'll see how I can improve the tone to make this flawless.

    Aug 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Take Me To Peace

    Thank you! Your review made my day. I'm glad you liked the poem. I agree that lover is not just a romantic term. It's more subjective, I feel. Who exactly ...

    Aug 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Take Me To Peace

    Thanks for your review! I feel like lover is a vast and subjective term. Who exactly is a lover? For you, someone romantic. For me, someone I love and who ...

    Aug 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Take Me To Peace

    I understand perfectly what you are trying to say. Thanks a lot! I'm happy you liked the poem. :)

    Aug 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: Creations

    Thanks! I'll see where and how I can make changes to improve the poem. :)

    Jul 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: Creations

    Thank you so much.....having one of my works being called 'Shakespearean' is perhaps the biggest compliment I could ever recievE! I'm so happy you liked it. Thanks :D

    Jun 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: Creations

    Thanks for your precious review...! I personally prefer to capitalise the starting of sentences, rather than the first word of every line. As for 'shedded', I've changed it to 'shed'. ...

    Jun 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: Creations

    Hey...thanks a lot for your review! Even I write everytime as a single word, but when I wrote it, the computer showed a red line below it, indicating that it ...

    Jun 23, 2014


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