TheStormAroundMe

People can recognize Talon's face because his eyes are blue and no one with blue eyes exists anymore. I put this in the first chapter, but maybe I should restate ...

People can recognize him by his eyes because everyone with blue eyes was killed. He was the last blue-eyed person in the country, so it would be hard to mistake ...

Yes, I decided to call each Chapter where Talon narrated by the passwords he was guessing in an attempt to hack his father's secret files. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thank you for reviewing! I'll have to go back through and edit so that the Breeding Program is more explained.

Thank you for reviewing it! I'm glad that you liked it.

Okay, so the poem itself is good. More than good. You mentioned to ignore the title, so I'm assuming you know what to do there. Unfortunately, this wasn't really my ...

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Since this is part four in a novel, I can understand why you would be confused. I tried to explain this stuff in an earlier chapter, but I might have ...

That's fine. I have been really behind on posting more, obviously. Thank you for reading it!

Thank you for reading it! I do like to spend a ot of time thinking about this world. It's sort of like a going-to-bed exercise. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thank you! Chapters one and two have been posted on this site, seeing as this is part three. I'm glad that you enjoyed this piece! I wil have more up ...

I have no comment on the plot line at the moment, since I think it's pretty good for a first draft. What you need to work on now, I think, ...

I disagree with the person below me. Your main character seems just fine to me. Even if I did hate her, I could probably still give a review. Just saying. ...

No, nothing else is out yet. It should be pretty soon. Thank you for reading this part! I will look into better explanation.

Thank you for reading! With the "signed" part, I was trying to make Talon sound all cocky and arrogant. I'll have to work on making that come through.