TheSilentBagpipe

Thank you so much Katie!! I love getting reviews on my story it is very helpful! I will most defintily try and fix the mistakes I made :) I do ...

I love this sooo much!! I write some poems but im not very good at it! LOL The only thing I noticed in this one tho is that it didn't ...

This is really good I like it!!

Thanks!! :)

Its really good, I enjoyed it and I haven't read the earlier chapters lol One thing: Some of your sentences are a little long....for instance - "Moreover, if I had ...

Thanks so much Fallen! Seeing someone take the time to read my piece is very encouraging, thanks so much!! Con- Thanks for the tip I will defiantly try to write ...

Thanks so much Fallen! Seeing someone take the time to read my piece is very encouraging, thanks so much!! Con- Thanks for the tip I will defiantly try to write ...