TheShauzer

Sorry for he duplicates, I don't even know...

Thanks Maddie :)

I exaggerated with fit, true. But I was friendly in my review and you replied calling it a cheap grab for points. That was just condescending and unfair, and now ...

*Uriah

I didn't understand how I could give feedback. As Irish said, haikus are rudimentary and for me they need to be a high calibre to have some kind of impact, ...

Look, I'm sorry that i marked it as a review but that's all. Wish I could change it to a comment and give back my 'cheap'ly gained points but I ...

The only way I think this could be improved on is by changing it to something else. I'm sorry, strange, but I genuinely didn't find this at all interesting or ...

Dude it even says 'joke' in the title?

People like you make me cringe. Does it physically pain you to take a joke? I told you I found it funny, but don't expect a literary breakdown because this ...

Nah I appreciated the help and agreed with a lot but for the most part I prefer my way ;)

Nope, I can't do it. It hurt me to change one line in the first stanza, this way just works nicer for me :')

Sorry fro taking so long to get back to you. Yeah, I guess this almost touches on lyrical, but I wouldn't be very strong on that side of things so... ...

It was actually really useful, thank you! I'll have a look back over and edit out some dryness, I knew there was something missing! Oh, trapped eyes was referring to ...

You got it ;) Thanks so much for the review, much appreciation!

You got it ;) Thanks so much for the review, much appreciation!