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TheShauzer

TheShauzer

  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Crumbling world.

    I picked it from your portfolio :D

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The War of Innocence

    No problem :) Glad I could help!

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Bloodlust Thoughts

    Ah, I see :) cool. No problem!

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Not How We Dreamed

    Ah okay. It's not necessarily a bad thing, no, I just kind of thought that you were trying to rhyme it - which would have been a bad thing :') ...

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Not How We Dreamed

    You did it pretty well for not noticing! :D In the longest stanza I felt a rhyme going on but then it dropped, sorry, I thought it was on purpose ...

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Old

    Thanks Hiraeth, I would expand but the idea behind this was really just to make people understand that being old doesn't change your personality or who you are, just your ...

    Feb 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Old

    Thanks Damien :)

    Feb 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Old

    Thanks a lot Tiffany :)

    Feb 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Old

    Thanks felistia. Much appreciated. Nice thing to see before sleep :)

    Feb 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: 12:00

    Okay, yeah, this review was cheap as Lidl.

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Twinkle Twinkle.

    Thanks Alucard ;) I appreciate it. And I hate it when that happens to me :')

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Star-Crossed Lovers

    By the way, inept was a nice touch. I thought so at least ;)

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Star-Crossed Lovers

    No problem :)

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Script » Historical Fiction, Film Re: Fred Harvey and the Harvey Girls (screenplay) Scene 1 & 2

    No problem %uD83D%uDE09

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Twinkle Twinkle.

    Thanks JOMP, I appreciated that. The 'such is love' line, remember that I'm talking about my girlfriend. The star is a metaphor ;) Thanks again.

    Jan 31, 2016


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