TheRollingTaco

This story seems almost fantastical. I'm surprised you put it in the "teen fiction" section! It's a good start for a novel that has a lot of potential, so keep ...

I had that "Oh snap" moment when her aunt couldn't see who was on the bed. If it's only the beginning of the story, it's already very captivating and I ...

This poem is extremely accurate. I like how you use repetition with the word "until" and its synonyms, it's a solid, followable pattern. There is a lack of punctuation. It's ...

This story had me hooked-- it was fascinating. Your characters were compelling and it was full of action and adventure. However, the whole storyline was rather unclear. The wheelchair thing ...

This is my first review, so please bare with me. :) I can relate to feeling bored and not being able to escape. Your word choice was careful and excellent ...