TheReader22

I think this is a pretty good add on to Breaking Dawn. Of course, it's no exactly how Stephanie Meyer illustrates Bella's mind, but I still think you did a ...

I really liked this poem. I think the entire thing flowed, although the end was a bit off. The darkness seeps closer reaching for it knows her she's familiar with ...

Red stains on the carpet, contrasting brilliant white, the hands that left them, soaked with red, are begging to be cleaned. I like the contrast between the blood and the ...

This is an interesting idea! I think the poem didn't really flow, but it all links back to you which is nice. Is this really about you, because it seems ...

I really like the way you formatted this. It sends a strong message and it makes me really miss him too. Never going to let go of him completely This ...

This was a really awesome piece! I think it flowed and made sense, there's a hint of mystery as to who the main character is until it's noted that it's ...

:P That's really funny!! I love your creativity ;) But, I am most definitely a Star Wars fan!!

Wow, I think this is a great story. I love how you express all the senses, the smell of the cab, the feel of Max's lips... I really like how ...

I think that this is a very interesting aspect, to look into Renesmee's future ;) Good job! I like how you made her life similar to Bella's, but maybe add ...