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  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Blood of the Martyrs Chapter 1

    Thanks for the review FireBird! No I am not French per se. My entire name (first, middle and last names) is French, and I have a very expansive French ancestry, ...

    Jan 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: Tale of the Tongues: Chapter 1:Awakening

    Thanks for the review, brother! Yeah, Haldir's name was the one name I was struggling with. It turns out the character's name is really Hadvar, so I'm gonna change it ...

    Jan 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: Tale of the Tongues: Chapter 1:Awakening

    Here's just a brief appendix so you don't get confused while reading: Places: A Hold (ex. Falkreath Hold) is basically the Nord name for a province or state. Skyrim is ...

    Jan 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: An Arrow's Flight - Chapter 1: Rebellion (III of VI)

    I thank you, random reviewer! I appreciate your short (and sweet...) review. :-)

    Oct 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: An Arrow's Flight - Chapter 1: Rebellion (I of VI)

    Thanks for this honest review! Eventhough you critised this piece into Oblivion, you also gave advice on how to improve the piece. I shall make the necessary adjustments. And yes, ...

    Oct 5, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, General Re: The Canvas of Life

    Thanks for the great review! Yeah, the typos are mostly because of my small screen on my cellphone, but I'll edit that immediately. Like I told Lava, I am planning ...

    Sep 28, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, General Re: The Canvas of Life

    Thank you for the great review! I shall expand on each season according. I couldn't expand on it during the exan, because we had a strict word limit for our ...

    Sep 22, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, General Re: The Canvas of Life

    Thank you for the great review! I shall expand on each season according. I couldn't expand on it during the exan, because we had a strict word limit for our ...

    Sep 22, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, General Re: The Canvas of Life

    Note: The stars are just to ensure that my paragraphs stay seperated paragraphs.

    Sep 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: An Arrow's Flight - Chapter 1: Rebellion (II of VI)

    Hey, wolfie! Thanks for this review. Firstly: There aren't ANY werewolves! (Don't let James read this), but you'll find out what Canis and Ice are as the story progresses. Because ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: An Arrow's Flight - Chapter 1: Rebellion (II of VI)

    Hey, JC! Thank you so much for being one of our biggest fans and that you reviewed this piece (as you promised). There is a good reason why we did ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: The Eccentric Eight

    Thank you for this review! The grammatical errors were because of sleep deprivation. I'll be sure to edit them out. P.S. - I'm so glad you could connect with this ...

    Jun 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: The Eccentric Eight

    Thank you for this review! The line which states that the Music teachers turn you to ice is the absolute truth. I've had first hand experience. :-)

    Jun 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: The Eccentric Eight

    Thank you very much for this excellent review! I must admit that I made some stupid grammatical errors, but that happens when you get inspired at 11pm South African time.

    Jun 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: An Arrow's Flight - Chapter 1: Rebellion (I of VI)

    You'll be the first to know when we publish the next part or chapter. In fact, I'm going to call James now and ask him when we're going to publish ...

    Jun 21, 2014


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