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  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Deleted 61

    Yeah that could've been a very awkward sentence... :P And why am I Hermione? Yes, according to multiple personality quizzes she is the HP character I am the most like ...

    Oct 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Sunset

    Hey steam! Thanks for the honest review (I like harsh yet upbuilding critique, so...) This was just a quick mash-up of ideas I got when I accidentally pressed the wrong ...

    Sep 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Sunset

    Thanks Fortis! Yeah, this just what my mind does when I accidentally press the wrong button, and I am extremely tired (my ideas usually flow more when I'm tired... :P ...

    Sep 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Remember the Cotton Candy Days

    Hey @Aley!! This was actually my first attempt at actual poetry, so I know all to well how overdone it is... Thanks for the honest review, and I'll take everything ...

    Sep 30, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, General Re: The Canvas of Life

    Hey @Aley! This isn't actually a poem at all... This is actually just a reworking on an essay I wrote for a grade 10 exam, so It wasn't supposed to ...

    Sep 30, 2015
  • Other » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Alphabet of our Love

    Oh trust me... I won't... But thanks!

    Sep 24, 2015
  • Other » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Alphabet of our Love

    Hey Char!! This isn't a review, but I just came to say, as a person who is also very much in love right now (our obstacle isn't distance, it's age ...

    Sep 23, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Tale of the Tongues: Chapter 3- Unbound- Part 1

    Thanks for the great review, Bugsicles! It was indeed helpful, and I'll be sure to make the necessary adjustments.

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: If you Stole my Notebook...

    Bravo, Waltzing!! This piece... Ah, this piece... You truly know how to capture a lovestruck wizard's heart! Truly remarkable. Btw, if this is out of real life experience and there ...

    Aug 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Tale of the Tongues: Chapter 3- Unbound- Part 1

    Thanks for the review, my fellow wizard and Air Nomad! I have taken in everything you pointed out, and I shall make the necessary adjustments when I get time to ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Culture Re: For Sale

    Hey, Grandmaster Snoik! This is just a comment to say- Wow! You literally gave new meaning to the term Short Story. I mean... Nine words... There should actually be a ...

    Jul 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Tale of the Tongues: Chapter 3- Unbound- Part 1

    Okay, unlike the other two chapters published thus far, this one shan't have an appendix, as no new information has been added which isn't covered in the previous appendices. However, ...

    Jul 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Politics, Historical Fiction Re: This is our land

    Hey Pretz! I actually am a South African, so this poem is naturally about the country. Also, if you wanted to refer to the region, you would call it Southern ...

    Jun 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Politics, Historical Fiction Re: This is our land

    Thanks for the review, Rebel Writer! I shall definitely go and review your pieces for you.

    Apr 20, 2015
  • Poetry » Politics, Historical Fiction Re: This is our land

    Thanks for the review Firelight! I'm glad you liked my poem. I shall remove the ellipsis at the end (I really don't remember putting that there)

    Apr 20, 2015


For according to the trollish philosopher Plateau, "if you wants to understan' an enemy, you gotta walk a mile in his shoes. Den, if he's still your enemy, at least you're a mile away and he's got no shoes."
— A Blink of the Screen by Terry Pratchett