TheOtakuLord

that would be amazing

thank you so much! I will plan to fix and improve it as soon as I'm done with the book.

thank you so much. This is only the first draft and I plan to make it even better. Maybe you can even help me write it :)

thank you , I hope you are left wondering whats going on and why he would rather die than let everyone down

hey I know its been a while since I last published anything so here is improved story of atomas and tim. I hope you enjoy

sorry i didn’t mean to do that =…i just wanna say I love this!

all of those will be handy for when I become a book myself…so thank you for some guidelines to survive a story.

it was a typo

i meant to say achieve

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i meant to say achieve

plus i did made her cry for a reason you'll find out soon enough

okay....thanks for the review and ill fix that as soon as possible

could you help me with that?