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Re: Prologue
Hello, and thank you for your review! Okay. The dullness leading to excitement is rather the plan here. If you put it a way, that's how big bang is thought ...
Sep 10, 2016 -
Re: The War in Their Eyes
Sorry, forget this, it counted it as a comment.
Sep 5, 2016 -
Re: The War in Their Eyes
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Sep 5, 2016
Review time! A story about modern life? Or ancient conflict? I really cannot tell, but from what I'm reading it's rather creative. I enjoyed the talk of feasts and war, ... -
Re: Chapter one
Thank you once again for the review! The italics was basically portraying that fancy way that books start their chapters, in italics or Capital letters. And Alright, I'll fix up ...
Sep 4, 2016 -
Re: Prologue
Thank you for mentioning it. As for the describing, the flawed world will be showing more throughout the series. I will, however, put more description into the perfect world. Thank ...
Sep 3, 2016 -
Re: Chapter one
Thank you!!!
Sep 3, 2016 -
Re: When Mothers Fought Daughters
You are welcome!
Sep 3, 2016 -
Re: Me and My Imagination: Chapter 2, The Nightmare
You're welcome!
Sep 3, 2016 -
Re: Prologue
Thank you for the review! As for the second thing you mentioned. They spoke about it between one another but never really decided all together to do it, if that ...
Sep 2, 2016 -
Re: Prologue
I really enjoyed the imagery in this. I especially loved the Character's attitude, his "meh" Personality with a bit of bite to it. Honestly after reading this I want to ...
Sep 2, 2016 -
Re: Crimson Seas and Burning Suns
I absolutely love the description in this poem. Very beautifully arranged!
Sep 2, 2016