TheOffBroadwayAuthor

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My main thought on the novel thus far is that you skipped over a lot of details. For instance, what was Cortez and Shayene's marriage like at the beginning? How ...

Alright! I'll do that

Thank you!

Thank you for your feedback! I'll fix that typo. For the motor, I meant it more literally. A bell jar is a device used to create a vacuum, and it ...

Thank you so much! I'll remember the focusing on feelings over symbolism in my next poems. That's really helpful!

I think everyone can relate to this and learn from this. People don't seem to understand that the guilt we feel from making mistakes is enough. We don't need someone ...

I was not expecting that. It's so rare to find a trope subversion that actually surprises you these days. Thank you for your beautiful story ^w^

I was not expecting that. It's so rare to find a trope subversion that actually surprises you these days. Thank you for your beautiful story ^w^

Is it love? Also, just gotta say, your poetry skills are superb. All the symbols made sense once I figured out the answer. I can tell you've really thought about ...

Is it love? Also, just gotta say, your poetry skills are superb. All the symbols made sense once I figured out the answer. I can tell you've really thought about ...

Nice way to say "everything in moderation". I do want to know, however, what your "positive addictions" are distracting you from. Aren't your passions, reading and writing, what is distracted ...

Nice way to say "everything in moderation". I do want to know, however, what your "positive addictions" are distracting you from. Aren't your passions, reading and writing, what is distracted ...

Nice way to say "everything in moderation". I do want to know, however, what your "positive addictions" are distracting you from. Aren't your passions, reading and writing, what is distracted ...