TheManintheHat

Hi Jelen I know this is the barest of beginnings, but I have a few ideas up my sleeve. I just can't decide what I like best. As for the ...

I really should have put this under Science Fiction, upon reflection. The Seed is indeed artificial insemination, but that is not at all the reason. There's a fundamental point that ...

I enjoyed reading your poem, but I cannot call it great. You held my interest, but there was nothing truely special about it. I firmly believe, though, that you will ...

Instead of ruining the fun of discovery, I've made a minor change. The Ones line up on the clock Tic…toc...tic…toc The Twos line up on the clock Tic… toc… tic…toc ...

I really enjoyed myself reading this poem. There's not much to nitpick at, and most of that is just personal preference. So I'll leave you with this: Good Work!

I have more to it, if anyone is interested.