TheManintheHat

Hey Fir the longest time I told myself that comedies weren't my type of thing, but this is great. And like all great comedies, I see a layer of darker ...

As I started to read this, the narrator says that it all began with an old liquor bottle. An alcoholic writer's story , I thought, Good, but not original. Sometimes, ...

Good morning Retro (or good afternoon, or evening, depending on when you read this) First things first: the title. The title is how a reader will first critique your work ...

Hello Daniel I think that you ought to do something with this character. Just to see more ofthis world you have imagined would be nice. It seems like an RP ...

Hello racingforever10, This is reall a good poem you have here! The emotion and diction match well. The ony thig hat caught mye ye as something you mght want to ...

Hello Kylan For such a simple prompt, you've done well for yourself. It's not the direction I would have taken it, as it seems you chose to build metaphors instead ...

Hello there This was a very good poem, giving me a feeling that spiders are bad despite the fact that I usually have no reservations against them. My favorite part ...

Good Morning, Ermixon, or Afternoon, or Evening, It has been a while since I have reviewed anything, so I thank you for writing something that caught my attention and warranted ...

And the Apocalypse continues! Hello again Panda, I'm here to review this latest piece. I like how you're switching POV's, first of all. This can be tricky, but in a ...

Good Morning, Panda. Or Afternoon, Evening, Night, whenever you happen to read this. When I first saw the title of this piece, I immediately went over to your portfolio and ...

Hello there, I never could write a good action scene, and look what you've done here. That's not to say that your story was perfect, however, but it was better ...

I actually found a sort of charm in this style of writing. I must be frank: it was not terribly exciting, nor provocative, but there was something that made me ...

Hey there, All the nitpicks I caught were already mentioned, so I;m not going to waste your time repeating them. For what you have, I was interested. Not by the ...

Hello Skorpionne, I'm going to get the bad part out of the way: as it has been said, a few of your rhymes are forced. There. That's it for that. ...

'sup bro I'm not the biggest fan of science, but that didn't stop me from appreciating your poem. It's been said before, and I second the notion: This might go ...