TheMadHatter

It's about pigs. It was an english assignment to write a moral poem. She also printed it out and stuck it on her fridge door to try to pursusde her ...

Phew. When I saw the title of this poem I thought it would be an actual ode to maths. But I read it anyway because I was curious and bored, ...

Oh this is so sad! It truly is beautifully written. I love the way you repeated parts, it tied it all together and made it feel whole, whilst adding a ...

I don't think I can really tell you how to improve this because, in my opinion, it's perfect already. Of course there are plenty of bits you could change, there ...

I always thought that when I died, I would see the world slow down. But that metal in my chest, made me glade what?! it went by fast. I wasn't ...

This is really good! I think it could really go somewhere yet. Maybe add a few more verses that explain a bit more about the situation, like why she thinks ...

This is really good. It's so sad, even more so than the first part in my opinion, and I had a realy clear image in my head. “Lidia,” Caitlyn cried ...

I really liked this. It is essentially a very dark and disturbing story, but told in a light hearted and almost comic way. It tells of the termoil suffered by ...