TheGirlNextDoor

Dear Deanie, Absolutely amazing. I've shared this with my sister and friends and all three of them about passed out. Your poem blew us away. I thought my sister's eyes ...

Dear clevercogs, Wow thank you so much for your positive feedback. I completely agree with you about some of the choppiness (and yes, choppy is a word, at least in ...

Dear Ash, Wow thank you so much! I felt like a lot of people could relate to this poem, I find it very universal. I'm glad you were able to ...

Apologies for somehow submitting that 3 times...

Dear DappledCities, Wow. Literal shivers. I have goosebumps. This is amazing. Have you ever read anything by Virginia Woolf? She was a famous writer during the 1940s. Your writing style ...

Dear DappledCities, Wow. Literal shivers. I have goosebumps. This is amazing. Have you ever read anything by Virginia Woolf? She was a famous writer during the 1940s. Your writing style ...

Thanks for the tip! And I understand about the ADHD thing, my ADD is what made me comment in the first place. ADD/ADHD gets a bad rep sometimes, but I ...

Wow, rereading my P.S. comment there at the end I feel very rude. Apologies!

Dear jayflames1, Wow, thank you for all the little editing comments. I didn't you could take snippets like that from the author's writing and put in your review. I knew ...

Dear readers, I'm thinking of changing the name of my story. I kept it as 'London, 1864' just to make it easier, but I'm leaning towards something different. What are ...

Dear obliviousoracle, Thank you! It's really amazing to be getting such good reviews. I've been getting a lot of comments about adding more emotion to my writing and you're absolutely ...

Dear amac, Please don't cry!!! I will be finishing this story just as soon as I can and love the fact that I already seen to have a fan ;) ...

Dear EternalRain, Wow it's so nice to get so many positive reviews on a piece that's not even finished! Thank you for your suggestions and I will definitely take them ...

Dear yizhongt, Thank you for your suggestions. I realize this story kind of dropped off at the end and leaved a lot hanging but it also is no where close ...