TheForgottenAuthor

I love this! It's so true!!! Oh, gosh. I love the way you quoted SP in the end...Oh my gosh this was awesome! Keep on wrtiting...you're really good!

this is a good poem, but it sounds a little emo-angsty for my taste. To make it a little better try re-phrasing some parts. Some parts we've all heard in ...

How about "No More" as a title? Since this poem is about how you don't want any more... But anyways, this is a good poem! Keep it up!

hhmmm I tried making it "her's" but it says its spelled wrong so I didn't do it like that. But thank you!

OK, just for clarification, this is not a "why am I here" type of poem. This poem is a "why has almost everything imaginable happen to me" type poem. the ...

okay, just to put it into clarification, the questions were the point of the poem. Thats kind of why the poem title was a question. My point in putting the ...

hhhmmm I don't know if that is quite what I'm looking for...but I won't lie...it's a great name! :elephant:

this was great, I loved the way you described everything! very nicely done.

I tried a little too hard to rhyme in my opinion...but I think it turned out pretty well. It was supposed to be broad, and not too specific. This poem ...

Thanks guys!

thx for the critiques, guys! for fand, the title was not meant to be "screaming". I just wrote it because I always title my poems/songs in capslock. but anyways, thx ...

you sound angry... And you overused the word "Bitch" too much. try using some other colorful words. but other than that...nice.

Dude...thats cool. :D

That was cool I really liked it! kinda weird how everything was jumbled to gether, but other thatn that very well written!!

sorry about the name change in the end...I had made her name Ursula at the beginning but tried to change all of the times I put Ursula to Angela. Sorry ...