TheElderOne

Sure.

Thanks for the review, Night. My inspiration came from watching a documentary over illegal immigration of young children as well as an officer coming to my Government class to discuss ...

Sorry for being so late. Again, this was interesting. Very interesting to see how this goes forward. So, this isn't a review, but it doesn't mean I'm losing interest. I'm ...

Thanks! I've been reworking the story to include some of the details mentioned by all who mentioned them. I'll put it out when I can.

Thanks, and I'm currently editing this story to work in the details you mentioned.

Thanks, and as for your question, I personally think that an fully capable A.I. could have feelings. If it can evaluate art or music or people negatively or positively, it ...

I meant for either interpretation, and thanks!

Wow, I really didn't think of things like that... But thanks! And I don't mind over-analyzing. It's perfectly alright.

Thank you very much, Wolfare. I am thinking that the sin is pride of thinking that Adam and his wife could create a baby without God's help. They, to me, ...

It had an interesting start. I'd like to see how this Sebastian character will be developed and what the title 'Thief-Taker' entails. I can make a few educated guesses, but ...