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Re: Mercy of the Sword Saint: Chapter 5
Thanks yet again. Yep, you're absolutely right, it's a lot of information right at once. Although, Natalia wouldn't be a new characters for readers of the first two books. It's ...
Jan 15, 2007 -
Re: Mercy of the Sword Saint: Chapter 4
So, you told me that if I write about it now, explain it now. Uh, no. Bad writerly advice. Teasers are part of many novels. Then you tell me not ...
Jan 15, 2007 -
Re: Mercy of the Sword Saint: Chapter 3
I appreciate the reviews. I haven't made the corrections here on YWS because I'm very busy, and I'm getting to it. No, for Gleebeck, it's "is it." Sometimes, when talking ...
Jan 15, 2007 -
Re: Mercy of the Sword Saint: Chapter 3
Thanks yet again. I appreciate you pointing out the typographical errors. As for the plot issues. Since when do they know each other? Lol, they always have, you just didn't ...
Jan 14, 2007 -
Re: Mercy of the Sword Saint: Chapter 2
I have little in reply to say here, because most of your critiques were technically specific (a good thing,) so I will just say that I will carefully read over ...
Jan 14, 2007 -
Re: Mercy of the Sword Saint: Chapter 1
I value my reviewers, plain and simple. I do feel the need to reply to every critique. I think out my writing very well, I think, so when someone objects ...
Jan 14, 2007 -
Re: Mercy of the Sword Saint: Chapter 1
I have to disagree. Sometimes, I like to start with action, but I really prefer descriptive prose. It's a matter of taste, I suppose. Don't worry; there's plenty of action ...
Jan 13, 2007 -
Re: Mercy of the Sword Saint: Chapter 1
Crimson Twilight: I appreciate your compliments, your suggestions, and your candor. It is good of you to balance your critiques both with positives and negatives, and I really appreciate the ...
Jan 12, 2007 -
Re: Mercy of the Sword Saint: Prologue
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Jan 11, 2007 -
Re: The Wizard
Thanks to everyone for reviewing The Wizard. It most definitely needs work on the commas. To the reviewer who said it could be turned into a novel, I guess, but ...
Dec 11, 2006 -
Re: Chocolate Rapper
It was certainly interesting, lol. Pretty good parody of typical rap, if that's what you intended. And I love chocolate myself, so, you ladies better be willing to share! Funny ...
Dec 2, 2006 -
Re: Classic Parody of a Song
Appropriate timing for the time of year, of course, and well done. I absolutely love spoofs (I even spoof some of my favorite songs). No suggestions that I can think ...
Nov 28, 2006 -
Re: Eulogy
No thanks. I think the point is made, lol. We're beating a dead horse at this point.
Nov 28, 2006 -
Re: Eulogy
I think if you had read my prior post a little more carefully, you wouldn't have said anything, simply because you were only reiterating exactly what I had been saying, ...
Nov 27, 2006 -
Re: Eulogy
Yes, I agree with everyone's comments on the poem. Let me reiterate what I told Incandescence in a PM: My comment about not caring about replies and suggestions for my ...
Nov 27, 2006
