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Re: The Pit: Descent
I'm not very nit picky when it comes to other people's writings, so I'm just gonna say what I think. I really like. It definitely caught my attention from the ...
Aug 27, 2012 -
Re: to be a Princess
I love love love this
Jan 2, 2012 -
Re: [Post Deleted]
Awww soo cute keep writing this I love it.
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: Eating for Two
wow I loved this and I never caught on that she was pregnant. Nice twist.
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: Kiss me in the rain, baby.
Awwww so cute, I loved the time lapse.
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: Romeo and Cinderella
I enjoyed this, being dyslexic I couldn't really tell if there were any spelling mistakes or a misuse in punctuation so I guess that means I thought it was good. ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: Do I Dare
I totally agree with the both of you. And your not being harsh, the whole point of this site is so that writers can have other writers read and give ...
Jul 16, 2011 -
Re: Cody
I thought the story line was good, but I was having a little issue with the gender of the person speaking. Was it a girl or a guy. Also is ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: Kiss me in the rain, baby.
I fell in love with this piece of writing. It triggered all of my emotions, love, hate, sorrow, pain, and did I mention love.
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Eyes of a Stranger- Part Two
I absoulutely love this. Keep writing.
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Eyes of a Stranger- Part One
Oh my gosh I loved this. It was really awesome. Can't wait to read the second part. Which I'm fixing to do right now.
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Lost in Love
Good. Short, very short. But it was short sweet and to the point, which is always awesome.
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Fatal love
I really like this, and it's so true. Even though I have never been in a realatioship I felt the pain and the hardness of being dumped.
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: The Memory of John
thank you
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: Universe of Dreams
Wow that was really deep. Very descriptive, I could literally see myself in that room. Oh and nice word choice, it's amazing how much descriptive words describe a story.
Feb 19, 2011
