TheDayBeforeTomorrow

Wow, I can't believe I didn't see that she was a cat! :) I kept on thinking that she must be a little girl or something, silly me. It's definitely ...

Wow, this is pretty great! The verses flow together nicely, and it makes sense but doesn't make sense at the same time. For example, what do you mean by 'the ...

This poem is pretty good. I was reminded of the Nazi camps when reading this: the conditions were exactly the same. I had done some research on them and this ...

This is really cool! I love narrative poems, which is what you've written as you've told a story through a poem. It rhymes as well, which is something that I ...

Wow... this is a really powerful poem. I think you did wonderful on writing this: it's not long and winding, and you got your message across in just eight lines. ...

Great poetry! I really enjoyed reading this, and the imagery was very vivid. Though I think you can change 'each dream that I've dreamt' to 'and dream that I've dreamt ...

I really loved reading this! The beginning's wonderful, except 'when' would be more appropriate instead of 'where'. It gets a bit cliche in the middle ( cutting and depression) but ...