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  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: The River

    Hey Rydia, Thanks for checking my poem out and giving me some advice. A-A-and also, thanks for fixing the line breaks! :D I've noted down everything, thanks again!! Also, should ...

    Oct 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: The River

    I tried to separate the stanzas again, but I dunno, nothing changed.

    Oct 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: The River

    And thanks again for the tip about the periods. I added them too :) I tried to separate the stanzas, but it didn't work...

    Oct 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: The River

    Hey Sheyren! Thanks for checking in! I actually separated the stanzas in editing, but I don't know what happened. I intended for it to be 4 lines for each stanza. ...

    Oct 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: The River

    Hey Frinderman!! Thanks for the review, and yeah, I see your point about the stanzas. I did separate them in editing, but I don't know what happened. As you probably ...

    Oct 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dark Changes

    You're welcome bro :)

    Oct 8, 2016
  • Art » General, Other Re: I F***** Up Again

    BTW this reminds me of ' I hate u I love u ' by Gnash, nice work again!! :)

    Oct 7, 2016
  • Art » Other, General Re: 09.27.16: Original Work #1

    I like it a lot, we need to chat man! :)

    Oct 7, 2016


Russets and tangerine shades of old gold flushing the very outside edge of the senses ... deep shining ochres, burnt umber and parchments of baked earth—reflecting on itself and through itself, filtering the light.
— Guildenstern (Rosencrantz & Guildenstern Are Dead by Tom Stoppard)