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Hey Rydia, Thanks for checking my poem out and giving me some advice. A-A-and also, thanks for fixing the line breaks! :D I've noted down everything, thanks again!! Also, should ...

I tried to separate the stanzas again, but I dunno, nothing changed.

And thanks again for the tip about the periods. I added them too :) I tried to separate the stanzas, but it didn't work...

Hey Sheyren! Thanks for checking in! I actually separated the stanzas in editing, but I don't know what happened. I intended for it to be 4 lines for each stanza. ...

Hey Frinderman!! Thanks for the review, and yeah, I see your point about the stanzas. I did separate them in editing, but I don't know what happened. As you probably ...

You're welcome bro :)

BTW this reminds me of ' I hate u I love u ' by Gnash, nice work again!! :)

I like it a lot, we need to chat man! :)