TheCrimsonLady

Hello, love! Aurora here for a quick review! Technicalities first, love: I watch the country side stroll by. I watch the countryside stroll by. I still had trouble believing that ...

Hello, love! Aurora here for a review! Technicalities first, luv. Everyone called it Devil Touch, for it was just like a blessing from the devil, but devils can't give blessings, ...

I actually like the vampires and even though it is cliche . However, this confused me for a time. Does she still have her memories?I still haven't figured this out. ...

I have not read the previous chapters but this chapter may or may not have confused me. :) To start off with technicalities. I didn't find any technicalities in your ...

Hello, love! I enjoyed this chapter. I guessed right in the review of your prologue, I see. A few (or one) technical error(s). Castor dropped her rag on the table. ...

Hello, love! I like the second part of the first chapter. Alright. Technicalities first. She thought me could be a retired pirate. She thought he could be a retired pirate. ...

Hello, love! I personally enjoyed your first chapter very much. It set the scene for a very nice story that could potentially go on a very long time. A few ...

Awesome chapter, love! I haven't read the previous chapters, so if I get something wrong, forgive me. I liked how you started it, but I think you should describe the ...

Hello, love! Aurora here for a quick review! Technicalities first, luv. He wasn't exactly inconspicuos, was he? He wasn't exactly inconspicuous, was he? Nothing good. He was sure of that. ...

I like this prologue very much! Its not all mystery and confusion like so many prologues are, and I thought that you could have even made an entire novella by ...

Hello, love! I like the beginning of your story! A tip; when a different person starts talking, ALWAYS start a new paragraph. Technicalities first: Cleo lifted her head, really slow ...

Hello, love! Review time! Alright, so I had a hard time getting past all the grammatical and spelling issues. Once I got past them, though, your story flowed nicely. The ...

Hello, love! I like where the story is going. However, I really did never figure out if this is in the future or the past. If in the future: make ...

Hello, love! I enjoyed this chapter and Mrs. Svypes was hilarious. And annoying. I think you could have cut some of the bit in the middle- that scene really seemed ...

Hello, love! I love this story and will most definitely follow it! Annabella... I love her name! The story developed very nicely, and I love the strongness of Annabella. She ...