TheCrimsonLady

Hello, love. Aurora here for a quick review! Alright, to business. A sudden call of a drowsy pegion First, it should be pigeon. Second, I think you should change your ...

Hello, love. Aurora here with a review for you. Oh. Wow. Dark and disturbed, all right. I like the use of 'I remember' before each verse. It has a nice ...

Hello, love! Aurora here for a quick review. So let's get down to business. I will gladly admit that I haven't read your previous chapters, so bear with me if ...

Hello, love. Aurora here for a review. First thing I suggest is to split this up into two chapters. Because it's long. But ohmigosh, would you hurry up and write ...

Hello, love! Aurora here for a quick review. I'll try to make it good for a fellow watcher. Alright. Nitpicks and grammatical errors: His favorite, the glazed with blueberry filling ...

Hello, love! Aurora here for a quick review! Alright. Straight to work. I like this chapter a lot more than your last one. For one thing, it's not riddled with ...

Hello, love. Aurora here for a little post review day reviewing. Can I just say... Right side? Interesting. I'm trying to think of what this represents. I can't think of ...

Hello, love! Aurora here for a quick review. A little post review day review madness. Or I just love the after watch. Probably a combination of both. I didn't catch ...

Hello, love. Aurora here for a little post review day reviewing. Like I haven't reviewed enough. :/ Also, I'm a member of the After Watch. Woo! I have to say. ...

Hello, love! Aurora here for a post review day review. Clear the green room! Your biggest issue is that you don't capitalize things at the beginning of sentences. Also, you ...

Hello, love. Aurora here for a review. I meant to review this SUCH a long time ago, but ran out of time. Now, as a member of the After Watch, ...

Hello, love! Aurora here for a post review day review. Ah... Where to start. Okay. How about the obvious. This is not a sonnet. For one, it has too many ...

Hello, love! Aurora here for a quick review. I'm holding down the fort so that no works are left in the green room, you see. So. That was an awesome ...

Hello, love! Aurora here for a quick review! Must.... Keep.... Green room... Clear... Of all... Works. I haven't read any of your previous chapters, but that's okay. I'll critique this ...

Hello, love! Aurora here for a quick review. Got to clean up the Green room, yes? The arch-mage pointed his staff towards the enemies that were coming for him. A ...