TheCardsHaveNoMemory

Thank You!!

Thanks! It definitely helps)

Hi ancient! Thanks a lot for your review! I put this piece on here because I wasn't sure about it (wasn't sure if I should keep going, wasn't sure if ...

*mind-blown*

In my opinion, it makes it more dramatic, the capitalizing. . . I decided on Teddy Bear because the little boots, the dress, the crib, the stuffed animal, she boughta ...

This is so incredible. You can really hold a reader. I especially like the last line... A lot of good poems can be a bit anti-climatic, yours was not. I ...

I love it! ITt's so dramatic!

I like this poem, but it leaves me wanting more! What I do when i write a short poem like this is I just save it as a draft and ...

This poem did not have a lot of rhyming, yet there is still something very beautiful about it... I really like it. You have a way with words.