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Re: Removed
I have to say the chapter was rather short, a bit too short for my liking, but I still liked it, to some degree. I think the whole, "drops the ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: Shock of the Rose Killer (Prologue and Chapter 1)
I'm not the biggest fan of mystery, but I actually really liked this first chapter. It was a good start to the novel so far. I also really enjoyed the ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: Cocktail (chapter one)
I actually thought that this was a good start to a novel. It got me wondering exactly what they aime to accomplish, and why. Also, I enjoyed how after each ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
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"She wears a dress of flowers and ivy. Breathes life as other look upon her with ency. Her beauty diminishes as smoke fills her lungs. Begging for air, as it ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: You Can Call Me Sam, Chapter 1
I thought this was amazing. The whole setting seems calm, but in an eerie way, and everything is described so perfect and wonderfully. Personally, I think Sam is a well ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: nothing
Besides scattered profanity, I liked it. And actually, the swearing actually added to the affect of talking to a complete lunatic who has lost it. It's sort of eerie in ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Lonely
Very dramatic, and makes me feel... depressed. Also, I think it's a bit cliché, with the whole, "hobo in a box on the side of the street." Other than that ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Chase - Prologue
I definitely found it interesting, but I was a bit confused while reading it. I'm not quite sure what the narrator realized, but did his friend commit suicide, or something? ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Truth and Lies
I'm glad I took the time to read this. Even though it was a long poem, I enjoyed... and I'm not the biggest poem fan. Each stanze was powerful in ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Inferno Prologue
I liked it a lot. Very well written. The end of a story is usually how I judge it. I like endings that either wrap it up, set up the ...
Nov 22, 2011
