TheAuthor

For some reason, I couldn't really get a proper understanding or feel of this poem. I mean, I understood that it is about death, obviously, but, other than that, it ...

Wait, you don't normally write poetry? =O In that case, your really gifted to be able to write with such talent. There really aren't any mistakes besides the ones that ...

That's a real nice piece of work. Good job. However, there are some mistakes. These suggestions and corrections will start from the beginning of the story to the end. They ...

I believe that this fight could've been greatly intensified if you described things a tad more. Like, let's say, the specific movements and attacks they made to one another. That ...

Well, I can't really give advice or anything since this isn't your work, but I do have to say that your eight-year old has some skill. He is well on ...