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First thing that I noticed was that the first letter of each sentence was not capitalized. Correct punctuation is important, because it makes writing easier to read. In general, people ...

I like this one, it makes you think. Life beyond death is a scary topic, yet something everyone has to deal with. I think you did a pretty good job ...

I seriously loved this poem! Was it about someone cutting themselves? That's what it reminded me of at least. I love how you used lines, colours, etc. to describe it ...

This isn't a piece of crap! I actually really liked it. I like how you made it seem like you were talking to someone else, maybe a mean girl at ...

The layout for this poem is great in my opinion. I was a little confused about what it was actually about though, I thought maybe two people waiting for something ...

Hey, I love the message of this poem. People tend to push things they'd rather not think about, like child labour, to the back of their minds, and this forces ...