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Re: You, I Love
You I love. You’re so sweet. I’ve got butterflies that reach my feet [Maybe it's just me but I feel as if this line was used as a last ditch ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Jus do beta
I could see this poem in a setting where it's being spoken. Reading it doesn't have the effect as it would have through speech. I agree, you do ask a ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: You
Hi there! I'm slipping in to give you a review. :D I'd have to admit, there are an immense amount of commas in here. (Perdido already stated this). If you ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: You're dying.
I'm going to be honest, while reading I was searching for some type of meaning or significance and couldn't find it. And the fact that I was not able to ...
Apr 2, 2010