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Thank you so much!

thank you so much! Prince Pincas does have a very important arc, however I can see how his personality seems to contradict itself in this chapter.

Thank you so much Cricket! I really appreciate the advice!

thanks so much megs! I am gonna have to start publishing more chapters now! I appreciate the advice, cheers!

thank you so much for the review! I am working on refining the whole magic system.

thanks for the review!

thank you so much for the review! i have been told about the show not tell thing before, I am working on it!!

thank you so much for the review!

thank you so much or the review!

Thank you SO much for this review! I really appreciate your criticisms and your compliments! It gives me confidence which means a lot. I know what you mean about the ...

Thank you so much for the review! I have been told not to info dump, I am guilty of it quite a lot. I have written about 270 pages of ...

Thanks again for the review Judas! much appreciated, you make good points here. Cheers!

OK, sure thank you for the review! I understand the problems you have with chapter 6. I will fix them in time! Although I do think that the assassin would ...

Damn! i hate it when i change to 'Me' and 'I'. I apologize. Thanks for the review, i am glad you like it. The next two chapters are up already ...

you have given me so much confidence now, shady. thank you so much. this is such a great help. Because of you i am going to publish the rest of ...