ThatGuitarGuy

real good story :) you should write a book, like a legit one and try to publish it. if anyone i know can publish a book, it's you :D it's ...

i can't express the ability you have to put emotions on paper (or monitor in this case :P) you really have talent for making people feel things :) especially me ...

I really like it :) your a really good writer, i have no idea why you say your not :P

I am good :) i used to think about all this kind of stuff in detail but i have a person in my life now who has saved me from ...

Thanks for your feed back :) I'll be sure to put everything into consideration before i post my next story, i only uploaded this one without much proof reading and ...

Thank you for your reveiw :) I will make sure that i work on all those things in my next story :) This is my first story so i knew ...

this is intense, but awesome :) you should expand on this :D it has a lot of awesomeness in it :D