Teoffany

I saw "Iriad" and thought, 'cheater! You can't steal a title!' because I thought the title was Illiad. Glasses, anyone? The (Narrator) No need to tell us there's a narrator ...

No real complaints except for two things. For one, whenever there's a new speaker, you need a new paragraph. I think that's already been covered. Also, when someone makes a ...

It's a line-by-line! I stole the idea from another website. Let me know if anything's unclear. Rain fell woefully, the sound of it's its relentless dance filled the hollow lane. ...

The beginning immediately threw me off. Instead of showing me Lenard's apprehension about what he's doing, you tell me about it, and lose a critical opportunity to build your character's ...

Elves are a type of fey that has [have] developed a very physical existence. They belong to the Seelie court but have integrated extremely [add the modifier "well" here or ...