Tennantsayswhat

Yeah, for some reason I was having a hard time writing this in the first person. I guess I missed that when I was reviewing.

This is really helpful. I was experimenting with changing my usual style and it didn't exactly come out as i had planned. Thanks!

Thanks, I was experimenting with using as few words as I could while still telling a complete story.

Thanks so much! (I'm pretty new here too)

Oh yeah, that was definitely from Doctor Who, I kinda forgot about that lol.

Haha, yeah, I'm a huge Doctor Who fan. I didn't purposefully copy the style of Doctor Who, but I did write this after watching "The Day of the Doctor" for ...

Wow, this is such a creepy story (in a good way!). I couldn't stop reading it. I liked how you didn't over write this. You gave just enough information in ...

Thanks!

I agree with you, reading this again, i realized that there's not a lot of feeling to when he realizes he died and has to make a choice, so there's ...

Thank you so much!

Yeah, that's totally a typo, awk.