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Hello there! Although Lumi, as mangaged to give you some tips on almost all the elements of the poem, I felt compelled to share my opinions with you. Here we ...

Hello! I haven't got much to say, the first review was quite good, but I felt I should say something when I read the poem. Here we go. This was ...

Hey Percy! I would like to review this. Here we go. First of all your diction. It was simple and understandable which makes it easy to read thereby giving a ...

Wow! Skins, you my friend possess a raw talent, a dark flame burns inside you and you seem to kindle it with insomnia. This was great. Your diction was simple ...

Wow!! This is a remarkable symphony of poetry. Your poetic diction was excellent, your voice was clear, distinct and strong. You choice of words gave sensuous imagery. The mood was ...

Hello! It was a beautiful poem and I would like to review. Here we go! First of all, the poetic diction. The language of the poem was simple and understandable, ...

Well. It's a good poem. It feels like a poem of clarity. There was no imagery. The imagery was more like emotions. This is a first for me and strangely ...

I am not here to review but to commend on how great the voice was in this piece. Also, strangely it seems we had the same inspiration. I would like ...

Welcome to YWS! I hope am not too late. So, let's get to the point. I look for 4 things in a poem: imagery, poetic diction, mood and voice. Using ...

This is a good poem! The poetic diction is very simple and to the point, which is good. The imagery was very sensuous, I could actually imgaine every movement in ...

This a nicely written piece. There are 3 things I look for in a poem: voice, poetic diction & imagery, tone &mood. So here we go! Voice: I love the ...

Green- I like Yellow- I don't like Red- I don't understand In the after, my soul swims in the heavens, and flies in the river. I fall into the abysmal ...

Nice poem! I love your voice. It was simple and quite to the point. I also love your poetic diction it made the imagery quite powerful and distinct. Just one ...

Nice poem! I love your poetic diction. It was self-explanatory making the imagery quite easy to visualise. I also love the voice. It was compelling and it makes the reader ...

First of all: WELCOME! Apart from the fact (already pointed out) that you should shorten the lines, the poem is good. I love the voice. It was solemn and peaceful. ...