TellATaleForTwo

Wait! I also loved the tone of this chapter. Everything can't be all fun and games(not that is was before), this chapter brought some... je ne sais quoi to it. ...

Im here! Ok, so, Craig speaks spanish! I like how he takes responsibility for things and starts to get kind of protective of her. Forgive me if this is a ...

*just realized that she read forever ago and never commented* Omgsh! they've met up again! finally! Yayness! **sits and waits foe the next part. (Hopefully not as long as last ...

umm, as far as pointing out the bad goes, im good. I thought this was really good! will you posting any more? i would like to read more about this ...

er... there is nothing to critique(not that i see anyway). all i can say is i want more! lol *siits and waits* ~Tina

I agree with SK, all you really need to do is work a bit on your word choice, spelling, and grammer. Overall it was pretty good! I'll be looking for ...

this is good Nick! though it still kind of reads like a letter or something. I think you just need to learn how to pick and choose your words a ...

well, this is much better than the last couple things you posted. watch out or you may get booted from the site. just a friendly warning. ~Tina

As bob says, no need. If you don't have anything constructive to bring to the table, don't comment -- laugh to yourself.

lmao, the idiot that clicked on http://www.pathetic.com>>>>>>> ME... XD

I loved it Clau. Good Job! It was really funny.

once again... AWSOME! *sits and waits patiently for more...*

I really enjoyed it, you did a good job at making it sound like a high schooler, with high schooler concerns. But there are a couple of things I noticed, ...

Hey Jon! I really liked this. Cant wait till you put up more. So ah... when will that be exactly???

lmao wow okay so umm... yeah that was awsome! on to number 3!