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Re: Flawed
Thanks for the review! And someone else pointed that out at some point and I forgot to take it out. Oops xD but thank you for the reminder :)
May 26, 2016 -
Re: Water
I would love to! I think it would be great :)
May 25, 2016 -
Re: Water
TahaT11n, Thank you for your suggestions! I see know that those adverbs are god awful together. And thank you for your praise! I'm literally addicted to alphabet poems XD I ...
May 25, 2016 -
Re: Water
Spartan118, You pretty much hit it on the head XD Thanks for you for your suggestions :)
May 25, 2016 -
Re: The Work of Sins
Trelose, This is a great poem. I really loved the repetition that you used in this poem. It adds motion and rhythm to the piece and really draws the reader ...
May 23, 2016