Teddybear

Thanks!

I wish you luck, in that case.

I'm actually planning a sort of part three. You see, the way it's set up is this two-parter was plot 1 of the Ringly stories, I'm actually working on plot ...

Thanks!

Thanks for the tips! I'll keep these in mind when I go back and edit this piece.

Thanks for your honesty! I'll keep all of this in mind when I go back to edit this and in future works.

I don't know about any new title ideas yet, but I'll think about it.

You too!

Thanks! I feel for you on that English thing. If I wasn't a native speaker I would have given up on learning it as soon as I got to vowels, ...

Yes, but that way was rather rude and I'm sorry for it. I hope you have a good day, happy writing!

I will. I've been trying to rephrase things lately, but it's hard to break a habit. I'm working on it though, thanks for understanding and accepting my apology.

Thanks.

By shred it, I meant criticize every last detail, because that's how I work. I felt the need to clear that up because it seemed like you took it differently ...

I'm sorry for coming off as rude, I didn't mean it that way. Excuses won't help, so please accept an apology.

Thanks for being this thorough, it's a semi-rare thing on this site and it is greatly appreciated. Since I wasn't clear enough in the piece (to be fair, those were ...