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Re: A potatoe fanffic
You open up poetically with an iambic tritameter and a Dan Quayle reference as a masterful metaphor for our education system, and with the nod to Ratatouille as a subtle ...
Feb 17, 2016 -
Re: Society Only By Name- Part Two: The Dregs
I wanted to read through all of these sections so I could get to the final installment, but it's all confusing from the beginning. Maybe I'm just a simpleton. The ...
Feb 7, 2016 -
Re: Code Switching
Hey there, I'mma review this like it's an essay for a teacher as well. First paragraph, opening sentence: Your opening sentence lacks a hook, and you could put one in ...
Feb 7, 2016
