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*waves* Hiya Jared! I don't think I've read anything of yours. Man, I fail as a friend. xD The poor had no other choice than surrender to their own fate. ...

Hello Scribe! *waves* I don't think I've read any of your work? May I? Why thank you. =P There was a sizeable stretch of wilderness between two cities, in a ...

Onto round two! And hey, more for my 6-review-per-day quota. ;) I am so going to own that Instructor's contest. =P *stuffs foot in mouth* "My name is Mrs. Spektor, ...

*waves* Hello! I haven't seen you around YWS before. Welcome! My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D Marianna left the theatre, striding briskly *eats adverb* ...

Ohemgee Juno was a great movie. [/random] Anyway, hi! I'm Saint. I don't think I've seen you around YWS before. *waves* Can I ask you to do one veeery important ...

Hello there! I don't think I've seen you around YWS before. My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today! ^_^ Hm. You have a nice idea here. ...

A cliche is something that has been really, really overused and is completely blah now. Completely unoriginal. A better explanation. *goes back to lurking in the Poetry forums* -Saint Razorblade ...

Heylo! Looks like you've been around YWS for a bit, but I don't think we've met. My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D My heels ...

Ahoy there! Looks like you joined a while ago, but I haven't seen you around before. My name is Saint. :D I'd love to give you a proper critique of ...

*eats you* =P Agatha’s bones shivered beneath her skin as she stood under the hotel’s awning. She swore she would hear he knees knocking if the rain wasn’t smothering all ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! Haven't seen you around before. I'm Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D Bah! Solid block of text! The first thing you need ...

there a point to this? I mean, the voice is good, there are a few kinks in the writing but it's nothing alarming, but honestly, what's the point? Who is ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS. My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. Your biggest problem right now is that this is really short! I can easily say ...

Okay, so you went from one end of the spectrum to the other, yes? There is no action. Hardly any, at the very least. Not to mention it is extremely, ...

Sweetheart, this is no way to start a novel. ;) A guaranteed way to get a publisher to say "No way. What are you, on crack?" is to start off ...