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There's a cool mix of rhyme schemes in this one. The first stanza is very, very good. The couplet at the end reminds me of ye olde English poetry: simple ...

Short and sweet: this was a really cute piece and I enjoyed the youthful (and somewhat snarky) themes contained in it! The part about sleeping made me laugh; ahhhh, the ...

I can see what you're going for here, but there's some lines in here that could be omitted for the good of the poem. I KNOW, writer's hate that word: ...

I like the earthy feel to this. I mean, seeing that your username IS "medievalwriter", you've certainly fulfilled the requirements for good ole' poetry. The religious overtones add to the ...

Like what everybody else is saying, the switch of rhyme schemes is a bit abrupt and you should usually stick to the same form throughout a piece. But that certainly ...