TaylaChase

Um, you guys? I don't think strandsand was meant to be a word, it's just missing a space. It's supposed to be 'strands and exhale'. Just saying.

Oh, and another thing, I really liked the line 'this beautiful rain will never die' and 'why can't tears be beautiful?' (Sorry, can't use the right quoting cause I'm on ...

Sorry about the short and unfinished review, I kinda ran out of time, sorry.

Thank you all for reviewing my story! :mrgreen: ~Tayla :smt026

Hi everyone! Thank you all sooo much for reviewing my story! You helped me out a ton and my story is now (hopefully) better than when I started out with ...

Thanks you everyone for reviewing my story! You've been lots of help! I revised my story again and hopefully it's a bit better than before! Thanks again! ~Tayla

Hi, Thank you for reviewing my short story everyone! I've revised it hopefully to correct what you found wrong. Thanks again, I hope it's better! ~Tayla

Hi, Good job! I didn't find any spelling errors but when you repeated yourself you used a comma then a capital. Also, I'm not sure if you should repeat yourself. ...