TaylaChase

Hi Zanna! I liked your story a lot!! I like how you made each world connected to her in some way. Also I found a few sentences that I'm not ...

Hi, Good job so far, keep writing. I found a missing letter; If you lived you whole life believing you are just an ordinary kid It should be; "If you ...

Hi I found a few errors; There was something familiar about this mean I think you meant "man" there we lions and elephants carved into the wood. "were" my skin ...

I like the story but there are some missing letters; In the olden days, he people had lived to be hundreds of years old. "the people" Her messy mop of ...

This is really great! I feel I don't have the right to critique this, you could do better than me. I don't have anything to help you except I found ...

That was great, I really liked it. I didn't find any spelling errors. I'm not quite sure, but you might want to either put probably after they, or put a ...

Really great! I liked it a lot. Although I did find one error. It should be "The stupid things were everywhere" The stupid things were everything, darting between the trees ...

I liked the story but there were some errors. I would suggest going over it and watching mainly for punctuation, you were missing some capitals and a few comma's. I ...

Great job! I like the way it's written, but their are a few errors: With is guidance, the earth, being both male and female, was able to bring forth life ...