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Thanks for the reply. You Nearly cleared my doubts! I'd still suggest to bring more clarity to the story. You know, readers' understandability is important. I'm glad I was of ...

That's great!

Yeah. You're right.

Thanks for the review. By the way, I thought I mentioned the setting in this part. "He shakes his head and spits. The spit falls on the floor of the ...

Thanks for the in-depth review. By the way, I'd already noticed the thing with dialogue. I think only the particular dialogue you mentioned has that problem, the rest seem ok ...

They really are.

You're most welcome, Lia.

Also, thanks for pointing out the typos. I don't know how missed them! I'm starting to think it was a fantastic decision to request review from you.

Thank you so much for being so caring and meticulous in the review. I'm grateful.

Oh, that's great! Sorry if I embarrassed you.

Well, I didn't get one thing. It's not exactly your taste, and you still enjoyed reading it?

Thanks.

Thank you so much.

You're most welcome.

Thank you so much for the kind words. You've really inspired me.