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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Real

    Hey, there! This was a smooth romantic piece, even though it started off in a really dark setting. You mentioned you are writing based on the context of a longer ...

    Jul 9, 2020
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Emerging Bodies

    That is a teally sad and touching story of war. Well done. I like the tone in this piece. It was grave, delivered with a sort of irony that was ...

    Jul 6, 2020
  • Short Story » Culture, Realistic Re: The Grievances of An African Girl Child

    I don’t know if you wrote this based on real-life experience or not, but if you did, I'm so sorry for you. This is a piece that should be read ...

    Jul 3, 2020
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: ​We only live -once- twice

    I like this piece very much. You certainly have a lot moref potential. I Just had this one question in my mind: is this scientifically correct? I mean, the dejavu ...

    Jul 1, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Milliebird

    Love stories always have that sublime feeling, don't they? I liked reading this story from the beginning till the end. I love the feeling of love blossoming everywhere in the ...

    Jun 19, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Corrupted Courage Chapter 7

    Hello, there Vita! This chapter was a decent read for me. I think I mentioned this before. Your narrative is always poetic, has a lot of weighty words and occasional ...

    Jun 17, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Corrupted Courage Chapter 6

    First of all, sorry for being so late to review, Vita. You must be frustrated by now. But worry not because I'm finally getting to the review. I like your ...

    May 18, 2020
  • Article / Essay » General, Other Re: The Life, Times, and Adventures of the Oxford Comma

    I'm a big fan of scholarly essays that inform about new things and that too in smooth and entertaining language. And this essay was just what I love. Well done! ...

    May 11, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Locked in a Room With a Ticking Timebomb

    Hi, Lia. I'm back with another review. Well, thought-provoking literary fiction to an experimental script-like piece. That's good. You're experimenting. I actually like the fact that you're using curs

    May 10, 2020
  • Short Story » Literature, Dramatic Re: Sleep, Whale

    This is one of the best literary fiction I've read in recent times. Very well done, indeed. There are some writings that really hit the readers from deep within. It ...

    May 6, 2020
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Sound of Silence

    I like this short piece. You have portrayed the frustrations of Jackson pretty nicely here. Your tone of the narrative was perfect to match the anger of the protagonist. I ...

    May 6, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Corrupted Courage Chapter 5

    Hi, Vita. Well, I'm back to reviewing your nvel again! I like this chapter. You're doing a great job in portraying the anger and frustrations of the MC. I like ...

    May 5, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: At the Park

    You really have a profoundly substantial writing style. I love it! "The sky was the color of the ocean: a deep, penetrating blue with a few clouds to act as ...

    May 2, 2020
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: Barley's Coat

    I like this story! It's got an 'Aesop's Fables' feeling to it. Here's a little suggestion: 'Unfortunately, his world of paradise didn’t last very long.' You used the word 'unfortunately' ...

    Apr 30, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: I Kill Monsters (part 1)

    I like this story very much, aeternum. You have a lot of potential indeed. I like the tone you use in the story. It was not-so-serious, kind of communicated better. ...

    Apr 29, 2020


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