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This is a good story, people traveling to fairy tale worlds can be a bit cliche, but you pulled it off very well. I loved how random it was, and ...

An interesting story, especially with the different view on witches. Reminds me a bit of Sabrina the Teenage Witch, but it really is different from that. :D I liked how ...

It's a bit random, but vampires are always interesting. I do like your twist on the vampire: able to be out in the sunlight, and never having to sleep. It's ...

The Beast as a vampire is interesting, sets this retelling apart from all of the rest. The Beast being a vampire gives a new edge to the beast being terrifying, ...

So far, I think this is an interesting story. I like the glimpses that we've seen of your world, with Forest Spirits and Cursed Wolves. I do think that you ...

You asked me to review this post, so I shall review this one. I did read over the previous parts, to get an idea of the story. :D So far, ...

I think this is the start of a very interesting story, especially with how it ended. Makes me wonder what's going to happen to her, and why her father was ...

Okay, first of all I really only scanned the last two chapters. And, I do have to say that you might get more critiques, and possibly better ones, if you ...

This is a very interesting story. The characters are very mysterious, and draws one into the story. It's very hard to keep straight each of your characters, I keep getting ...

This is the kind of work that really drags a person in, especially with how real it is. I couldn't stop reading once I started. I love all of the ...

Hello! I've read your story, and I think it's very interesting. It definitely makes me curious and wanting to read more. Especially at the end, where you can just tell ...