Taleof6kids

Thank you so much for your review, Zoom. I really appreciate the good, helpful, constructive feedback! There is one more chapter that sort of sums up the whole idea of ...

I'm not a big fan of poetry, but I am a very big fan of this poetry! Wow. Just Wow! I'm so glad I read this and thank you so ...

Thanks, Tsunami! I appreciate your feedback!

Thank you! I appreciate your thoughts and will definitely tweak this per your suggestions! This is actually a symbolic story about me and my kids, so that may explain some ...

Hi Melanie. Good job on this first chapter of your mystery! I like how you introduced the characters and really made the reader feel like we are a part of ...

Wow! Thank you so very much for your comments and for actually reading the whole chapter! I did feel it was rather long myself, so thank you for enduring to ...

Thank you, Sweta! I appreciate the feedback!

Thank you. Sure will.

Sure. In the first paragraph, there should be commas on both sides of your appositives/names. Like: Her mother, Lilia Griffinths, also wasn't typical. And: Hettie's father, Evan Brown, ... This ...

This is really good! Thank you for sharing, and keep writing!

Hi Chase, I am very new to this (actually, this is my very first comment!), so please be patient. I did want to let you know I thought you did ...