TaleTypist

I'm going to be honest with you. :) You have a great general concept here, and your vocabulary is pretty impressive too. But the way you portrayed this general concept ...

I'm fascinated with this because, even as a Christian myself, I cannot tell which end of the spectrum the writer is coming from. At first glance, it seems obvious. "Oh, ...

The idea for this story really is a cute one, and that alone kept me reading it. If I were to offer any constructive critical advice though, it would be ...

I didn't particularly enjoy this piece myself, and do agree with the first reviewer above that the adverbs were overused. However, I do not think that this piece is poorly ...

I agree with Yuriiko that the root cause of this rant needs to be addressed more, or you run the risk of writing something that appears to be little more ...