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  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Tuesday [Supernatural cover of Rebecca Black]

    Bahahaha! That was hilarious. I actually played the original song while I read your lyrics. I never would have done such a thing and sat through that entire song if ...

    May 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Stalking My Stalker

    Awesome poem! Made me laugh. It also made me wonder how the narrator actually felt about her stalker (I'm going to assume the narrator is female here). Was she just ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Lost Carnage I

    Pretty interesting so far. The only thing that may need to be worked on is the layout. You give a lot of information at once, talking about why she was ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: His Dark Materials.

    I read this series a long time ago but I remember them being incredible. I loved how they were set in our world but with a few differences and tweaks. ...

    Apr 10, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Immortal

    Nice job! This is very good for your first try. I like how you made being immortal like a curse. This poem definitely makes you think about what that would ...

    Apr 8, 2007
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Maximum Ride- The Angel Experiment

    I absolutely loved this book! Of course it's not a very difficult read, but it was very entertaining and full of action. Fang was by far my favourite, and I ...

    Apr 8, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Your Angel

    This is a very good poem! I thought it flowed well myself, yet I'm no expert in poetry. I loved how you ended it by rhyming "sin" with "forgiven" and ...

    Apr 8, 2007
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Speak

    I read this book a few months ago and thought it was pretty good. The plot was definitely sad, but like mentioned, that's what makes it different from all the ...

    Apr 8, 2007
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: RedWall Series

    I used to read these books continuously. However, I've moved on. I think the last one I read in the series was "Triss" but "Mossflower" was by far the best. ...

    Apr 8, 2007


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