TabbyGirl

...Listen, *sigh*, I never start with negative comments. But, I have to say; could use some cleaning up. I found several little errors... And, well... besides that... this was an ...

Hm... well, this was alright. It was just an (as you clearly stated in the title) intro... I'm not sure if such an intro is really necessary, because I haven't ...

Yo, Jas... I'm Tabby, from the contest, 'member XD? Oki dai, so, I thought that opening paragraph was excellent ... you used a ton of great imagery... at first I ...

Okie dai, so, *cracks nuckles* let's gets started... I did sort of like the feel, and the way the narrator talked... there was some good discription and stuff.... However, It ...

I'm made to believe this piece won you 15,000 points... well done XD I did spot a nitpick or two, however.... The shopkeeper grunted, annoyed, and resumed glaring at his ...

Let’s start with nitpicks: I recognized her mischief tone and raised both my eyebrows. "Shoot." "Well... It's a boy. You know, the kid. In here!" She squealed. "Oh my god, ...

:( I liked it. A lot... It's weird because when I first started reading it I thought it was going to be about some teenage girl who has relationship issues ...

Hm... cool... well, like, my only real complaints are it was short (which isn't really a bad thing, but if it was longer I would have more to critique, you ...

Hm... that was... very intriguing... I liked it a lot. There aren't very many grammar errors I saw... besides the fact that not a single word was capitalized. That was ...

Coming from a novice (when it comes to poetry) this was more intricate, and deep, and meaningful, and poetic then anything I could even begin to come up with. With ...

HEY! So, I had to review this, because, you see, the topic ID is my zip code (crap, I shouldn't have let that slip...) So, honestly, I really liked this... ...

Okay, this HAS to be inspired by Norse mythology... Dark Elves and Light Elves? Eight worlds? Frost giants? Cool XD But onto reviewing... At the beginning I was under the ...

Hah, funny. A couple of nitpicks... So yeah, I sat there chilling with Tyler and Andrea, when all of a sudden I realized it’s I went home. I'm guessing you ...

Okie dai, well, I have to admit I didn't like this as much as I liked the last piece I read of yours... "Save the Last Dace for Me," but ...

(I believe "beaux" and "beau" are both correct... or maybe beaux is plural, but I don't think anything's wrong with that spelling... it's sort of Cajun, but that isn't a ...